Blood work and mammograms. When I turned fifty, I committed to regular
check-ups. Not to be mistaken with annual check-ups. Patients are now
encouraged to wait eighteen months before visiting their doctors for routine
tests. Tests allowed by the government—so far.
This week’s appointments reminded me of a short story I wrote about
four years ago. Culling of a Nation
was published most recently by Simone Press in the anthology Indie Trigger Short Stories available now
on Amazon. (Pardon the plug.)
Anywho, a doctor read this story and told me that I didn't realize how
close to the truth I was with my ‘speculative fiction’. Chilling words,
considering the subject matter of Culling
of a Nation.
Judge for yourself.
Culling of
a Nation
Phyllis
L Humby
“Six of your patients died last
month Dr. Reener. What do you have to say to that?”
Dr. Reener, expecting this
confrontation, replied in a clear voice. “Two more patients would have died if
they hadn’t sought help at the hospital emergency ward.” She challenged the
Chief of Staff with her own steely gaze.
“I look forward to a better
report next month, Dr. Reener. You have been below quota for the last three
months.”
Dr. Reener closed her laptop
and leaned back, resting her elbow on the arm of the chair. A manicured hand
covered the grim line of her mouth.
“As for the rest of you, I have
emailed your new quotas. All eyes are on us, people. Our community is the
training ground. You have the highest income of any doctor in the country.”
Dr. Allister swept her blonde
curls away from her face and locked her pale gray eyes on each of the twelve
professionals seated at the oval conference table.
“You are well paid for your
contribution to society. If you keep wasting the government’s money on tests,
blood work, and hospital care for senior citizens, there will be no money. Why
do I need to constantly remind you of the HCLS mandate?” The crescendo of her
voice echoed in the
uncomfortable silence of the boardroom.
Leaning forward, her hands
resting flat on the smooth wood surface, Dr. Allister invaded the space of the
newest member of the staff. Dr. Canter paled, accentuating the freckles
scattered across his boyish features. His child-like hand rested under his chin
in an unsuccessful effort to control the tremor.
“Dr. Canter, how many of your
patients died last month?” With his tongue glued to the roof of his mouth, and
hands too shaky to support a glass of water, he sat mute.
“I will tell you how many Dr.
Canter. Three patients died under your care. Three patients. What do you have
to say?”
“I don’t have my p-patient roster t-to
capacity yet. I’ve just st-started my p-p-practice.”
Dr. Allister’s cheeks flamed. “You
ordered MRI’s, CT scans, ultra sounds, and x-rays.” Her hands flailed in
agitation. “For senior citizens. People over seventy years of age, Dr Canter. Seventy!”
She slapped her hands on the
table. The young man flinched, his freckles convulsing against the greenish
cast of his skin. “Do you understand the HCLS - Health Care Limitations for
Seniors? Next month I do not want one test done on anyone over seventy years of
age. Not one test, Dr. Canter, or your career will be very short-lived. You are
affecting our quota and the reputations of all the doctors in this room.”
Dr. Allister, her porcelain
skin glowing, dabbed at the moisture collected on her upper lip and returned to
the head of the table.
“Let’s end this meeting on a
good note. The Lakepoint Rest Home is closing at the end of the month. By this
time next year, condos will surround the waterfront.” A smattering of applause
followed her announcement. “That brings the total closure of senior facilities
to four since we began our program.” More applause eased the tension out of the
room.
Dr. Allister beamed. Her
reprimand of Dr. Reener and the blunders of an inexperienced Dr. Cantor aside,
she accepted the credit for a substantial turn around in the budget spending. “Believe
me; our efforts have not gone unnoticed. More daycare facilities are proposed for
the work place. Not only will these daycares be at no cost to employees, there
will be a bonus for every employee who has children. Of course, the stipulation
being that the parent must be married.”
“This is a proud time for all
of us. Our government is doing everything in its power to restore balance and
build a viable population base.” The Chief of Staff looked at each of the
twelve doctors in turn before adjourning the meeting. “We will lead the way. We
cannot let our government down.”
“Doctors, after you leave the
meeting, please check your emails for the new quota on births. You need to
coach your young patients to begin their families early. Remind them of the
dividends paid for each child. Do not forget the daycare facilities. There is
no reason a new parent has to stay home with a child, and grandparents may not
be available. Everyone will work. Remember, their tax dollars pay your salaries.
Now, each one of you, return to
your office and take care of business. There are bonus cheques from HCLS on the
credenza. Pick them up on your way out. Dr. Canter, don’t bother looking for
yours.”
“I will see all of you back
here next month.”
Scary! Did you base this "fiction" on any research? You have successfully established a very tense few moments of reading here.
ReplyDeleteNo, Patricia, I didn't do research. A personal experience triggered this story. A thought of where the changes in the health care system were leading. Another case of 'what if'.
DeleteThis kind of scenario, even if you have dramatised it, is redolent of some trends here in the UK, Phyllis, and I suspect in other developed countries where the neo-liberal agenda holds sway, and where previously we have had a caring health and welfare system. Thanks for letting us read it.
ReplyDeleteMoira, 'Culling of a Nation' depicts a frightening scenario and yet it took little imagination to create this story. That's even more frightening. Thank you for your comments.
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